Darkthought
Nombre de messages : 32 Age : 32 Date d'inscription : 06/10/2006
| Sujet: Song Of mY Band Dim 11 Mai 2008 - 23:47 | |
| Voilà, j'avais déjà dis, j'ai un groupe de métal j'ai écris une chanson un jour ( un peu perso mais bon...) voilà je voulais avoir votre avis, positif, et négatif aussi^^ You used to be the breath Leading me... to death I've never seen your need Cuz remember what you did
In the coldest night, the blade on your skin Tracing something else, you're burning You raped yourself whithout pity Never forget what you let me see
You are born to hurt And I used to be A receiver for your culpability
You anchored me in the pain's circle In the fear's threshold and the hattred so cold You are born to hurt, and I used to love you
And now, I try to know Why am I asking these questions
Why can I live alone? Why can't you live alone?
In the final night, the tears on your face The odds are against you pulling through Cause of your neurosis, you fall from grace So you're living with dead end thought
( I lost my time, days and nights, to try to understand why, Devil in your eyes, blood on your arms, you used to smile Like a shyly child, unable to answer to my questions. You killed me cuz of all your death's wishes...)
You are born to hurt And I used to be A receiver for your culpability
You anchored me in the pain's circle In the fear's threshold and the hate so cold But that's the past, Now I'm free | |
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Rain-Eve
Nombre de messages : 4268 Age : 39 Localisation : Fribourg, Suisse Date d'inscription : 16/03/2007
| Sujet: Re: Song Of mY Band Lun 12 Mai 2008 - 9:16 | |
| C'est une parfaite chanson de métal. La subtilité d'un dinosaure qui conduirait un rouleau compresseur, l'optimisme d'un rat crevé dans une cave humide et sombre...
Mais sinon, l'anglais est vraiment nickel, super bon niveau, les mots sont recherchés et du coup le contenu passe un peu mieux pour nous autres non-metalleux peu habitués à ce genre de paroles. | |
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